I strongly believe that war should not be declared because war is dangerous and can be killed by people with weapons. As a matter of time war should not happen again because everything is modern. There are only two most important war in the world which are ‘World War One’ and ‘World War Two’. Imagine how do you felt about people died in the past few years. Especially in World War One, every year they have remembrance day which is held in Sunday to think about the people who died recently between 1914-1918. In wars, we will lose the people of the world by getting killed. The people of the world need to stay alive in a positive way. In World War 1, it only happen between 1914-1918 and in World War Two, it only happen between 1939-1945. For children, some of the relatives like your parents ready to go to war and if they got killed the children will do nothing and they will be in a rest of the life doing nothing. The deadliest war in the world is World War Two with 60–85 million people got killed. You know that war is very destructive. It will destroy human nature and houses. In wars, there are hospital when people got injured or died. There shouldn’t be a war because you only just killing people which shows no kindness. War is just a waste of time because once it destroys you going to have to rebuild it. The worst war that you will ever have is the civil war which is that you just fight each other. World War One held in Belgium in a Battlefield near Ypres. War is a types of disaster which is violent. Some weapons are poison by dangerous chemical.
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The redrafted mystery story
There were strange things happening in my house and I could feel that something happened to my family that I want to tell you about.
I live in a normal house, everything was okay and it was an ordinary day, I live with my family (7 people) which are my mum and dad which both of them are 42, 1st brother who is 15 (me), 2nd brother who is 10, my 1st sister who is 9, my 2nd sister who is 5 and my grandpa and my grandma which both of them are 72. We live near a wood.
We were going outside to play around the wood. Before going to the wood, everyone put their shoes on and ate their breakfast. Their mum said, “Finish your breakfast and you are going to play with your brother and sister in the wood for the rest of the day and you will enjoy it. Isn’t that right my dear?” “Yes mum”, I said. After that, we were in the wood and playing around. Suddenly, my sister fell in the hole and I was calling my mum and dad for help.
When I entered our house, no-body was there and I checked and checked and checked. The last room that I was going in is the basement. In the basement there was a hole like it happened to my sister when she fell in the hole. Then we were looking for the torches for us. I found three of them. “I think that’s quite enough of them”, I said and we took it to the basement. We turned the torch on and then it was far deep. It was like to be even more deeper until the centre of the Earth. I had a good idea. “I have a good idea, lets go to the centre of the Earth”, I said. “But how do we going to jump in a hole without any protection”, said my 2nd brother. “But if we jump in a hole, we’ll be dead”, said my 2nd sister. “Oooooooooooooooh!” the ghost scaring them. “Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!” All screamed. “Don’t be afraid of me. I am the ghost king of the underworld and I could take you there”, said the ghost king of the underworld. “Yes!” I said. We jumped to the hole and while I jumped to the hole I asked question. I said,” Have you seen my parents, my grandparents and my sister?” “Oooooooooooooh! Yes”, said the ghost king of the underworld. After that, we landed to the ground.
We saw my parents, my grandparents and my sister. “So is this a centre of the world?” I said. “Oooooooooooooh!! For a goodness sake! No! This is the ghost underworld”,said the ghost king of the underworld. “But when are we going to return to our home?” I said. “By midnight but if you don’t turn up to your home by midnight, you will be here forever”, the ghost king of the underworld said. “To return back to our home, you can fly”, my mum said. After all our chatting until midnight, I said,” What! Now it’s 5 to 12, we only have 5 minutes left until midnight.” And then we were flying to the real world. After that , we were back to normal and back in our normal house. “Where’s my dad?” I said. “I don’t know”, said my mum. “Boooo! Haaah! Haaaah! Haaaah!” Dad laughing. When it’s morning we had a great time and will never see any ghost in my house forever.
“Guess what, you will never see any ghost again,” said my dad, “Now we have a happy life I suggest that you children could go play at outside and I’ll always be there for you.
The End
war experience
My uncle been to war from 1998 to 2000 which is just two years. The war is in the border between Ethiopia and Eritrea. In war, my uncle is a tanker fighter.
HWK3 Text Based-KAL
1. “But we must learn to be equally good at what is short and sharp and what is long and tough.” By Winston Churchill’s speech “Never Give In”. What he was trying to say is that you have to be equal everything (50-50).
2. “We have perhaps lost one-third of the men we lost in the opening days of the battle of 21st March, 1918, but we have lost nearly as many guns — nearly one thousand-and all our transport, all the armored vehicles that were with the Army in the north.” By Winston Churchill’s speech “We Shall Fight on the Beaches”. He meant that he lose nearly half of his men.
HWK2 KAL-Text Based
1. “But one hundred years later, the Negro still is not free. One hundred years later, the life of the Negro is still sadly crippled by the manacles of segregation and the chains of discrimination.” by Martin Luther King’s speech. He kept on repeating “one hundred years later” because he was sad that the black people weren’t free one hundred years ago and he felt like that he needed to make some changes so the black people will be free.
2. “Now is the time to make real the promises of democracy.” by Martin Luther King’s speech. It means that he will give the black people a freedom.
3.”I have a dream that one day this nation will rise up and live out the true meaning of its creed: We hold these truths to be self-evident; that all men are created equal.I have a dream that one day on the red hills of Georgia the sons of former slaves and the sons of former slave owners will be able to sit down together at the table of brotherhood.” by Martin Luther King’s speech. He kept on repeating “I have a dream” because he want to make some few changes about that whit and black people should be equal which means they have to be the same.
HWK1 Independent KAL
I disagree that this House would ban homework because homework gives you knowledge and your understanding and homework might help with you for the exam. This is called revision. If you don’t revise that means your result you gonna get is low.
Mystery Story-Final Draft
There were strange things happening in my house and I could feel that something happened to my family that I want to tell you about.
I live in a normal house, everything was okay and it was an ordinary day, I live with my family (7 people) which are my mum and dad which both of them are 42, 1st brother who is 15 (me), 2nd brother who is 10, my 1st sister who is 9, my 2nd sister who is 5 and my grandpa and my grandma which both of them are 72. We live near a wood.
We were going outside to play around the wood. Before going to the wood, everyone put their shoes on and ate their breakfast. Their mum said, “Finish your breakfast and you are going to play with your brother and sister in the wood for the rest of the day and you will enjoy it. Isn’t that right my dear?” “Yes mum”, I said. After that, we were in the wood and playing around. Suddenly, my sister fell in the hole and I was calling my mum and dad for help.
When I entered our house, no-body was there and I checked and checked and checked. The last room that I was going in is the basement. In the basement there was a hole like it happened to my sister when she fell in the hole. Then we were looking for the torches for us. I found three of them. ” I think that’s quite enough of them”, I said and we took it to the basement. We turned the torch on and then it was far deep. It was like to be even more deeper until the centre of the Earth. I had a good idea. “I have a good idea, lets go to the centre of the Earth”, I said. “But how do we going t jump to the hole without any protective object”, said my 2nd brother. “But if we jump to the hole, we are gonna die”, said my 2nd sister. “Oooooooooooooooh!” the ghost scaring them. “Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!” All screamed. “Don’t be afraid of me. I am the ghost king of the underworld and I could take you there”, said the ghost king of the underworld. “Yes!” I said. We jumped to the hole and while I jumped to the hole I asked question. I said,” Have you seen my parents, my grandparents and my sister?” “Oooooooooooooh! Yes”, said the ghost king of the underworld. After that, we landed to the ground.
We saw my parents, my grandparents and my sister. “So is this a centre of the world?” I said. “Oooooooooooooh!! For a goodness sake! No! This is the ghost underworld”,said the ghost king of the underworld. “But when are we going to return to our home?” I said. “By midnight but if you don’t turn up to your home by midnight, you will be here forever”, the ghost king of the underworld said. “To return back to our home, you can fly”, my mum said. After all our chatting until midnight, I said,” What! Now it’s 5 to 12, we only have 5 minutes left until midnight.” And then we were flying to the real world. After that , we were back to normal and back in our normal house. “Where’s my dad?” I said. “I don’t know”, said my mum. “Boooo! Haaah! Haaaah! Haaaah!” Dad laughing. When it’s morning we had a great time and will never see any ghost in my normal house forever.
The End
English Homework 4
Word bank of spine-tingling words:
Exciting:
agitative, animating, appealing, arousing, arresting, astonishing, bracing, breathtaking, commoving, dangerous, dramatic, neat, overwhelming, racy, spine-tingling and wild. From Samuel in Y8
English Homework 3
Word bank of spine-tingling words:
Exciting:
agitative, animating, appealing, arousing, arresting, astonishing, bracing, breathtaking, commoving, dangerous, dramatic, neat, overwhelming, racy, spine-tingling and wild.
From Samuel in Y8
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