The redrafted mystery story

There were strange things happening in my house and I could feel that something happened to my family that I want to tell you about.

I live in a normal house, everything was okay and it was an ordinary day, I live with my family (7 people) which are my mum and dad which both of them are 42, 1st brother who is 15 (me), 2nd brother who is 10, my 1st sister who is 9, my 2nd sister who is 5 and my grandpa and my grandma which both of them are 72. We live near a wood.

We were going outside to play around the wood. Before going to the wood, everyone put their shoes on and ate their breakfast. Their mum said, “Finish your breakfast and you are going to play with your brother and sister in the wood for the rest of the day and you will enjoy it. Isn’t that right my dear?”     “Yes mum”, I said. After that, we were in the wood and playing around. Suddenly, my sister fell in the hole and I was calling my mum and dad for help.

When I entered our house, no-body was there and I checked and checked and checked. The last room that I was going in is the basement. In the basement there was a hole like it happened to my sister when she fell in the hole. Then we were looking for the torches for us. I found three of them.  “I think that’s quite enough of them”, I said and we took it to the basement. We turned the torch on and then it was far deep. It was like to be even more deeper until the centre of the Earth. I had a good idea.      “I have a good idea, lets go to the centre of the Earth”, I said.   “But how do we going to jump in a hole without any protection”, said my 2nd brother.   “But if we jump in a hole, we’ll be dead”, said my 2nd sister.     “Oooooooooooooooh!” the ghost scaring them.  “Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!” All screamed.  “Don’t be afraid of me. I am the ghost king of the underworld and I could take you there”, said the ghost king of the underworld.     “Yes!” I said. We jumped to the hole and while I jumped to the hole I asked question. I said,” Have you seen my parents, my grandparents and my sister?”   “Oooooooooooooh! Yes”, said the ghost king of the underworld. After that, we landed to the ground.

We saw my parents, my grandparents and my sister.   “So is this a centre of the world?” I said.   “Oooooooooooooh!! For a goodness sake! No! This is the ghost underworld”,said the ghost king of the underworld. “But when are we going to return to our home?” I said.     “By midnight but if you don’t turn up to your home by midnight, you will be here forever”, the ghost king of the underworld said.      “To return back to our home, you can fly”, my mum said. After all our chatting until midnight, I said,” What! Now it’s 5 to 12, we only have 5 minutes left until midnight.” And then we were flying to the real world. After that , we were back to normal and back in our normal house.  “Where’s my dad?” I said.  “I don’t know”, said my mum.   “Boooo! Haaah! Haaaah! Haaaah!” Dad laughing. When it’s morning we had a great time and will never see any ghost in my house forever.

“Guess what, you will never see any ghost again,” said my dad, “Now we have a happy life I suggest that you children could go play at outside and I’ll always be there for you.

The End